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Open Poetry #30

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2004-01-14 01:05 AM

We glance
so shyly
to the side

its been so many years

and we know
if things had been
differant

maybe things
could have been
differant

no regrets

regrets lead to
changes
that make things
differant

we dont regret the now

and deep is the
differance
of maybe tommorrow
a change maybe
in today
will dance in
indifferance

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-01-14 01:17 AM

We glance
so shyly
to the side

its been so many years

Awww Jason, I love the air of innocence you convey~

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

2 posted 2004-01-14 11:40 AM

and we know
if things had been
differant

maybe things
could have been
differant

no regrets
~~~~~~

somehow I always find myself in regret... great write.

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-01-14 12:57 PM

Jason, oh, if we could only live our lives without regret. Well done. Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-01-14 12:59 PM

sigh

big sigh

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-01-14 01:10 PM

and deep is the
differance
of maybe tommorrow
a change maybe
in today
will dance in
indifferance

Jason, I felt such sadness in this one.
I hope things are better soon.

Hugs

Ethel

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

6 posted 2004-01-14 01:18 PM

Know the feeling of this one all to well, wonderful write you have here.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

7 posted 2004-01-14 01:41 PM

This reminded me of one of my favorite songs. Thank you for that. I have enjoyed every one who lead me to where I am now, without indifference!

McLean

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