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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-01-13 09:58 PM

Twisting the heart as unknowns collide
the door of reason...Shaping the eve into
darkness that humbles even the brightest
star....shimmering beyond the sight of
anguish.

Wrestled, pinned to the welcome mat of life
as battles rage beyond the horizon...as Bell
rings and hope hangs by a single thread...
Awaiting the last snip...

If only the scissor’s blade would swiftly
close upon the string of clutch, cutting the
apron’s bow and bid adieu....

Peace, be well.....for the coffers are dry...
And tears no longer well the eye of one
who once wept in shame.....

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-01-13 10:01 PM

Barry,
You can't write better then that.

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

2 posted 2004-01-13 10:56 PM

Barry your poetry always leaves me feeling as though there aren't words enough to describe how lovely, how profound, how elegant.... you write as the Old Masters painted... incomparably, with few equals.

Hugs
Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

Serra_Avatar
Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 58

3 posted 2004-01-13 11:11 PM

now thats impressive...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-13 11:16 PM

"Peace, be well.....for the coffers are dry...
And tears no longer well the eye of one
who once wept in shame....."

The image of Rett Butler and Scarlotte O'Hara appeared to me (when Rett speaks his famous lines, "Frankly, Scarlotte, . . . .") when I read these lines. Oh yes, there were some dark days! Always enjoy reading you.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2004-01-15 09:19 PM

Twisting the heart as unknowns collide
the door of reason...Shaping the eve into
darkness that humbles even the brightest
star....shimmering beyond the sight of
anguish.

Love this, Barry~
There comes a time, and you wrote it so well.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-01-15 09:24 PM

"Peace, be well.....for the coffers are dry...
And tears no longer well the eye of one
who once wept in shame....."

Beautiful Barry....love the way you write.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

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