Open Poetry #30 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Spinnakers cast before my wide eyes Charming direction of the whitest lies As snowflakes wander the winter fire Dancing to caves of a deepest desire Lace pink the fabric upon my skin These covenant wishes tapered so thin In wisps of silk ribbons braided all through Tangled my wrists wrapped in bows of subdue Leaning my body in a tell tale tenderness Left empty drawn, drama leaves again lender-less As the snow of to know has dusted evenly Caught in snare of truth stated repeatedly Spun and set to the side, by the spell ever tied Giving all of the sound, inspiration replied Every story and sin sewn in needle and pin Brought to light as the night left its calling again Copyright Kkh 1/13/04 |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Imagine a cold sea a night ball an image I wish I could of thought of this when I wrote something Dave |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
Gorgeous poem! "Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying" |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A truly wonderful piece of writing here Kathleen. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Spinnakers cast before my wide eyes Charming direction of the whitest lies As snowflakes wander the winter fire Dancing to caves of a deepest desire "As snowflakes wander the winter fire" A truly captivating write Kathleen. You write such wonderful lines that are truly mesmerizing has with it the essence of a seamstress sewing words together into a fine fabric that captivates the soul. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gorgeous poem! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Oh, TD...this is simply amazing imagery and craft...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Spinnakers cast before my wide eyes Charming direction of the whitest lies As snowflakes wander the winter fire Dancing to caves of a deepest desire OH yes, Kathleen! |
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