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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2004-01-04 10:28 PM

The strands of time
delicately lap at the
edges of my reality…

They draw me
out of my reverie,
to dance among
the starshine…
and, sing to the heavens!

I open my heart altar wide
to allow you easy passage
to my soul…

Your radiance fills me
with the warmth of love
and the electric tingling
of creation.

We spread our joy
to the farthest reaches
of eternity…
and receive the knowledge
of creation in return.

We breathe…
And create a Universe.

We receive…
And know we are One.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2004-01-04 10:59 PM

This is so lovely!!! To find love like this is rare - it's a great poem!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-05 02:16 AM

must be nice...I do remember some of this feeling...and maybe I'll feel again...but for now, your poetry is good enough for me

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

3 posted 2004-01-05 10:27 AM

Thanks for the comments, PdV and Dixie! I appreciate them.

And...uh....Dix...you ARE this feeling!!! (Promise!!!)

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-01-05 12:18 PM

jc, what can I say? Now that you've pointed that out, I see it, and I am so touched, so beautiful...you are so beautiful

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-01-05 12:21 PM

jaicie114
alot of good stuff here.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2004-01-05 05:57 PM

"..electric tingling .."
That is what your words convey ... love's fireworks illuminating the remotest corners of universe.
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

7 posted 2004-01-05 06:51 PM

Another beautiful write JC. You have a compassion for passion and do it so very well. Thank you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2004-01-05 07:15 PM

They draw me
out of my reverie,
to dance among
the starshine…
and, sing to the heavens!

JC, I liked the whole poem, but this part
really spoke to me. Beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

9 posted 2004-01-05 11:30 PM

Dixie...glad I could point out the obvious, girlie!!!

Seymour, Margherita, RWV, Ethel...thank you so much for your nice comments. I appreciate each one of them and each one of you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2004-01-06 03:15 AM

Lovely...James

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

11 posted 2004-01-06 09:02 AM

Thank you, dear James!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

12 posted 2004-01-07 07:10 PM

Simply beautiful Jc...as only one who is opening her heart could write.

Love,
Eric

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2004-01-07 09:29 PM

This is a beauty, every single word of it!
*Bravo jaicie*

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

14 posted 2004-01-08 12:10 PM

Thank you, Eric and Bluesy...I always love it when you read my work and leave such nice comments.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

15 posted 2004-01-13 02:10 AM

Oh, for that moment! Wonderful write, jaicie 114!

ambrya_nell
Junior Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 28
Ohio

16 posted 2004-01-13 03:13 AM

such an inspiration....
Such a beautiful message to come through.
"Love & Light"

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

17 posted 2004-01-13 08:12 AM

Iliana and ambrya...

Thank you so much for your wondrous comments. I am so glad you enjoy my work.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

18 posted 2004-01-15 12:47 PM

such a lovely bit of writing, jaicie

Loved the phrase

"I open my heart altar wide
to allow you easy passage
to my soul…"

Pure love breaks down all barriers...lovely

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

19 posted 2004-01-15 12:52 PM

WOW!!! I am loving your poetry and so glad you are here.

Hugs, Marti

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

20 posted 2004-01-15 10:24 PM

steavenr...I'm so glad you're back...you are back, right? I can't have just "missed" seeing your "face" in all this time! I'm glad you like this one...it's a "good" one for me as well.

Marti...I'm so glad you are enjoying my work. I tend to stick with the one theme for the most part...but, then...someone has to do it!!!

Thank you both for your comments!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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