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The Fantasy Tree
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The Fantasy Tree |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
The misty fog swirls I am fearful, each step I take Lost, in the ethereal vapor Accompanied by eerie magic of the autumn moon~ A vine enshrouded pathway Seems like a peaceful resting place~ But the path Secluded and dark even unforgiving... trying to stop anyone's entrance into the enchanted glen~ The fog slowly rolls away revealing the old oak tree known once as the lover's tree Lover's once human Now forever, a part of the tree Bound within the sap and bark~ I watch the gentle sway of the limbs and think of lover's caressing bodies entwined... The lover's dance soon over~ As I turn away head toward home Feeling ashamed That I witnessed the lover's dance... while watching the old oak tree in the woods~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely... Wonderful imagery! Hugs~ ~ Happy Thanksgiving America! ~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great imagery...beautiful! Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Vivid imagery. Lovelly poem. Love how tightly the visual tapestry is woven. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the last verse just spreads the icing on the cake....wonderful write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Blush, LOL well that's understandable. Good write |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This poem brings two responses from me -- the sheer enjoyment of a beautifully conceived and written poem, and the hope that you are back to stay, so there'll be more. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oooo! I loved this enchanting piece of writing! Surreal and spine-tingly!   Earth Angel |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
Oh my These wonderful comments Thanks all of you all so much They mean so much to me Susan~~~~ |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
I completely enjoyed this lovely write......hope to see much more of you here. many blessings Eno Words are my medicine. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You took me there with you! I enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ This is astoundingly vivid with imagery~ Just yesterday afternoon I watched the oaks do the dance ... and you've written perfectly what I was edperiencing~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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