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Oh lady (rewrite)
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Oh lady (rewrite) |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Call my name oh lady At the last hour of your time And I shall ride forth to thee Defeating all the enemies in sight While id try to save one’s life Yet if I fall within this battle Id land upon the ground And leafs would follow me down Taking me on my last journey Through memories of old You’d appear to me once more Laid in my arms Under stars of dead kings Within the forest Beautiful roses would blossom As you would give one last kiss To my dying lips gone cold Forging your soul to my heart forever more Then ones grip would fail As Id return to the rivers Flowing me to the other world But do not shed a tear Do not cry For my lady it was nor your hour Or time but mine… [This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (01-10-2004 08:24 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Seems like a theme for heroic couplets Will look for the reworked version Gloom |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is lovely, so vivid with poignancy. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ I like it ... wonderful penning~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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