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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-01-13 08:57 AM



Legends Upon The Whispering Winds


                            
The mists of yesterday rise upon the mountains
of once upon a time when the ancients walked
throughout the realms of the distant past.

Proud was the heritage of those who dwelled
amongst the beauty of that which was
created by the makers hand.

Life was lived in serene simplicity
when the Earth Mother provided all that was needed
for existance upon her fruitful lands.

Joyous were the celebrations of a life
that had yet been untouched by
the clenching fists of mankind.

Waterfalls of mellow beauty flowed
in abundance into the mountains
and valleys of forever more.

Tranquility unfolded in nights of star lit wonder
where camp fires burned on the dawning horizons
of future journeys yet unseen.

Great were the stories that were carved in the memories
of elders with wisdom abounding being passed
from generation to generation with pride.

Edlers spoke in the stillness of the night
disturbed only by the occassional crackling
within the fires that burned of eternity.

The white wolf spirit listened with respect
from yon mountain side, with understanding
that he has grown in wisdom  with his native brothers.


  

Luna peeks from amongst the pines hidden in silver glow
as the white wolf spirit howls his presence
into the skies of the night.

~Those days of old have long since passed~


The past has slowly diminshed as it has been
dealt with harshly by the cruel hand of mankind,
yet  
    still,
the mists gather,
  Luna eternally shines,
the mountains listen,
          and the heart that seeks



can still hear the white wolf howling
breaking through the silence of eternity
as he calls to the brotherhood of spirits
uniting   they gather   once again~

~Their legends can still be heard
upon the whispering winds~


(c)Donna Smith  06-19-02
                                                                 Reposted from open 21


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{It was like a lighted match had been tossed into my soul
it was like a dam had broken in my heart
after taking every detour, getting lost and losing track
so that even if I wanted to I could not find my way back..
after driving out the memory
of the way things might have been,
after I'd forgotten all about us....
the song remembers when....Tricia Yearwood.}


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-01-13 08:59 AM


As I fell down this beauty, I'm thinking, WHY is it so comfortably known to me?  Ah...repost heaven!
Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-01-13 09:20 AM


Loved it then Donna...love it even more now!
Beautiful dear lady...just beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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3 posted 2004-01-13 09:47 AM


GentlestLittleSpirit~
This is YOU !  This is ME !
This is a beautiful and classic rendition of the peace found in our heritage~
Be proud ... you've every right to be for the sheer serenity of this penning~
*HUGLETS*
~*WillowWhiteFeather*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-01-13 08:20 PM



I said

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-13 08:40 PM


Wonderfulll writing -- very much in tune with my own thinking.  hugs......jo
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6 posted 2004-01-18 11:29 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I am blessed that you've reposted this as the Ani Yunwiya will forever thrive, which many of my ancestors with, and their blood flows in my veins and I carry their spirit songs forward with bliss! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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7 posted 2004-01-19 04:40 AM


are you my sister? my twin? my reflection? or am I yours? gawd! it's amazing!

this is incredible!

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8 posted 2004-01-20 04:27 AM


The past has slowly diminshed as it has been
dealt with harshly by the cruel hand of mankind,
yet  
    still,
the mists gather,
  Luna eternally shines,
the mountains listen,
          and the heart that seeks


can still hear the white wolf howling
breaking through the silence of eternity
as he calls to the brotherhood of spirits
uniting   they gather   once again~

~Their legends can still be heard
upon the whispering winds~

°°°°
Beautiful.....I enjoyed every word, every line...thank you for sharing

Charisma

Kristin Eve
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9 posted 2004-01-20 04:33 AM


this is a great poem,
with beautiful imagery.
I loved its nostalgia and reflection.

This would make a great commercial here in Canada!

"By the time you finish reading this...
You will have finished readding this"

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