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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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There is a mystery that surrounds the air that I breathe, as you come into focus. These eyes, though encircled dark, blink their awareness. Their limitations sensitized by illumination of your desire. Is it no fault of my own that the weariness I possess reflects the loneliness that keeps me in cloak? Shall I adorn myself in pretense to satisfy the needs of you? My words are shorn, many times pruned to fit an image that no longer exists. For time has a way of undermining my cut leaving me short of expression. My reserve, still jarred in keep for that "whenever." These eyes, will someday be revitalized when the mystery of you begins to unfold. M |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I really liked this Strong flowing understated passion Dave |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you are still as brilliant as ever..*smile* "Shall I adorn myself in pretense to satisfy the needs of you? My words are shorn, many times pruned to fit an image that no longer exists" ok, so i probably would paste the whole poem here if i could, but what i have pasted was the part i felt the most....Gosh, do i know how you feel... looking forward to finding the ones of yours ive missed all this time! lovely!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dave *s and my Muted friend..whom might you be? ~smiling~ M |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh i hope i havent confused you after all this time! i apologize if i have (but i still love this poem) did you use to be moonchild? because i was her dreamtime playmate poutprincess and if it is you, lovely to see you again, and if not......oh so very nice to meet you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have missed you poutprincess... so good to see you here...I hope you are posting again...you so often inspired me  I am spending my time today matching up the poets names and real ones used in the "Reflections Book" so I can know who wrote what... sure is taking me awhile, although I am almost done. hugs Maureen/Moonchild |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ You are penning some MAGIC~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Marge, well in between matching names of poets I am actually reading many of the poems and I guess my thoughts are running wild... hugss to you M |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i have missed you too! oh it really is feeling like home again! *hug* *hug* oh its going to be a brilliant day today! and yes, i have one posted at the moment called "Don't call to me"...would love for you to see it and comment...oh goodness this is lovely! ~Muted/Poutprincess/Dawn |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, awesome write...this was just beautiful and full of so much brilliant imagery! take care, amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maureen/Moonchild -- (I'm a flower eater myself) -- this was a wonderfully expressed write. I do, too, really understand. ....jo  |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
i especially enjoed the last stanza of this poem... as your thought there, is something I can empathize with. "These eyes, will someday be revitalized when the mystery of you begins to unfold." Thank you for a wonderful write! "By the time you finish reading this... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I believe every heart should have a pinch of mystery, but too much mystery can corrupt too much and too many secrets is never fun! (big angel hugs) May love be 99% open to you always, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds intriguing |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful expressed...enjoyed the read Charisma |
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