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misanthropology Junior Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 17 |
scaled up her gentle sandstone back barefeet rode a soft whisper into her head which I found to be a cavernous place where every sound was an echo and every echo a dying dream went slowly through the rooms in her mind soon came across a subterranean sea so lovely in its dark tranquility that I Shed my clothes on its shore and plunged in swam slowly through her ocean of memory exchanged pleasantries with the chimeras of the deep they were all quite nice and so tragically lovely in their estranged beauty we shared some wine and stories until the sun came up I told them I had to go woke up freezing |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A strong capture of the transit effect dreams have on our being. Excellent job! I enjoyed the imagination and the way that you delivered it in your write. |
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misanthropology Junior Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 17 |
thanks wolf. yes the poem is about dreams but its even more |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nodding here in understanding-- "woke up freezing" I shiver and go back to sleep. gentle and warm tone to this, I enjoyed the read. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This has a lovely mystery about it. |
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