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Open Poetry #30

An Angelic Queen

harash
Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

0 posted 2004-01-13 12:27 PM

An Angelic Queen

Silky hair and white linen skin,
Long curved lashes with glaring nose pin,
I couldn’t wait to do that sin,
In subconscious mind
I kissed her chin.

Pinkish red and fluffy lips,
Slimy body and puffy hips,
My eyes were thirsty to see those clips,
With sliding hands ‘on’
And
Playing with tips.

Long white legs,
Hips covered with cloth red.
She was looking like an angel,
I was thinking like that.
If she were my queen,
I wished and felt sad.
As it was dummy
And was placed
In the shop of my Dad.

~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*©~~~~

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

1 posted 2004-01-16 01:56 PM

Boy, I think thats the first time my mind wandered south over a dummy...

ROFL!! Interesting twist in this one, thanks for the read.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

2 posted 2004-01-16 02:37 PM

Silky hair and white linen skin,
Long curved lashes with glaring nose pin,
I couldn’t wait to do that sin,
In subconscious mind
I kissed her chin.
This is good. but after this is kinda goes south. specially the dummy part.
But I can see something in those first lines.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-16 03:13 PM

"Silky hair and white linen skin,
Long curved lashes with glaring nose pin,
I couldn’t wait to do that sin,
In subconscious mind
I kissed her chin. "

Good job!

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