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Primitive Innocence
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Primitive Innocence |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Primitive Innocence In response... Ever mingling in the waters of an unconscious thought Just below the surface graze of fingers aching to explore Molten bubbling to explode the seas of intimate magma Teases the taste of your kisses from the corner creases To the slightly parted center of these dreams Compelled to cleansing sacraments of fire and water Devouring passion that cannot be stopped or held at bay Drawing closer in frenzy of feelings too grand in their waves Drowning and choking in the gasps that fill such urgent lungs Enough to plunge another long and drowning drink The world disappears into the aura of an all consuming well We blend in a liquid present, exchanging gift after gift To love without hesitation or inhibition Until trembling marvel succumbs in a velvet embrace Panting and purring We are tamed Copyright Kkh 1/12/04 |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I dont believe for a moment you are tamed Can I as a special request, ask you to take an everyday thing and sing to it as you have sung these words The emotion in your words the capture makes me curious of yourself Dave |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
your words are very expressive; (I found myself holding my breath on some of this!) Enjoyed; I'd also like to see you Dave's challenge. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful Kathleen... Enjoyed the read so much! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really, what can I say, except this was just about as close to ectasy as I think one can write! |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Wow, I don't think that there is anything that you cannot write about that does not carry your passion and fury. You write with the utmost excellence Katleen. |
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ambrya_nell Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 28Ohio |
woah! very original.. i loved it. You're use of words and rhyming are very unique. Great style. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
There is nothing tame about these lines, or the feeling conveyed by you, the artist who paints such a passionate painting. Well done K. |
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