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So Call Me Blunt |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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I’m not a one To priss and please Or try myself On try’n to tease. I tell the things The way they are, ‘Cause sweetening Leaves none but scars. Though still I care, You see, its there Ahead of lies You say are fair. And I’m no girl With shaky knees. I will not sway Within your breeze. He was a man of sorrows |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
Really you should be like this..a fine and lovely poem..... always Harash |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Right on! I love this positive write, it's great! ~K~ |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
very good, strong Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you go girl!  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
being blunt, sharp and to the point...~C |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful and powerful words. Eric |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alyssa~ There is great strength in your thoughts dear poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
harash, as long as it is done in love, then you're right... honesty is always so much better. Thanks for the reply  Kahlil, can't believe I did a positive write! I must be deathly ill lol ...thanks for reading and replying Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Michelle, Thank you... I like strong. I hope that is what I am. Again, thanks Dix, thank you much  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
choshi, thats the way to go thanks for your reply.Eric, I'm honored you think so. Thank you very much Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Marge, Only hope I live them too. Thank you much kind lady Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this one, Alyssa...a great write! ~smiling~ M hope you are feeling well today |
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tavern wench Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 44 |
you must be a person people can trust to be upfront and sincere. good writing |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
GG -- good one! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I tell the things The way they are, ‘Cause sweetening Leaves none but scars And that's the way it should be, Alyssa.  Hugs Ethel |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
M, I'm glad you do you're so kind, thank you much!Tavern, I can only pray so... Thanks for the reply, good to ahve you here Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
iliana, thanks much for your reply, glad you liked it Ethel, I hope so, and agree, obviously lol .. thank you Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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