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kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

0 posted 2004-01-12 12:37 PM

(Author's note: I believe that to cherish each other is the strongest gift lovers exchange.)

For Lovers

Close to me, my dearest one, may you ever be.
Hang on, dear, this life, I know, is made for you and me.
Eagerly I hold the thought that we are now as one,
Realizing that one time, it seemed our chance was none.
Isn't this the moment that I stroke your lovely cheek,
Seeing light within your eyes that lasts me all the week?
Having you to care for, love, is all I'll ever seek.

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

harash
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since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

1 posted 2004-01-12 12:38 PM

ah!!what a beautiful write..

harash

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-01-12 12:41 PM

Absolutely beautiful Ken...

I agree with you..enjoyed this SO much!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-01-12 01:23 PM

It is indeed one of the better virtues to attain. Well done, Sir...I think I may chew on an acrostic, soon!

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-12 06:32 PM

sweet
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-01-12 06:38 PM

Ken, I love this poem. I have difficulty
writing these, and you can rhyme with
any form you write. That amazes me. I love it, and I'm going to keep it. Hope you don't mind.

Hugs

Ethel

Ravenwolfvoyager
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since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

6 posted 2004-01-12 07:39 PM

The pen is your heart and your heart is your pen, never separate them. A wonderful write KayJay

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

7 posted 2004-01-12 08:08 PM

To all who call upon my words
with notes and comments too.
My heartful thanks goes leaping out
Yes, it really do!

GG, as this unfolded from my fingertips, I thought of the many ways you've shown us all how to cherish one's love. Try an acrostic...they are a challenge, but lots of fun. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Serra_Avatar
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since 2004-01-11

Posts 58

8 posted 2004-01-12 08:48 PM

I agree. Selflessness is sure to follow that.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

9 posted 2004-01-12 11:25 PM

Your belief is reflected so beautifully in the pool of your words!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

10 posted 2004-01-14 01:40 AM

I especially liked the Author's note~

Very nice, kayjay~

KristieSue

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since 2003-01-31

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PA, US

11 posted 2004-01-14 11:43 AM

I believe you are absolutely correct :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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