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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-01-14 11:30 AM


Having a small place in the village,
Just got way to expensive so…
Encouraged by warm weather,
Roses jetted their points of vibrancy
Into new settings and began
Introducing themselves, offering coffee and muffins
Youthful couples pioneered oceans
To a clear meaning of good thoughts
Blowing away sticky humidity, through a whales snout
Following their compass of movements
Upon a sea of dreams

Swimming in the sea found
Lips rolling back with smooth white puberty
Winking in an attempt to intercept
Neptune’s loyal breath
Soundproofing the gamble
With a few maneuvers gesturing like a
Good book in a bed and breakfast

I held onto this noncommittal gesture for a few moments
Swapping inputs, feeling rather like
A key unlocking the front door of home
He played a couple of chords
While waiting for the connection
Rather divine and opulent
Like a breathtaking sunset over the Caribbean
Leaning forward with a silent simplistic view
One of which both complimented
And whispering in my ear, it tickled and tingled
And fulfilled robust promise and details of tomorrow
Taking me by surprise! And oh how I love surprises!

Firm answers slipped from the mouth of tropical rain forests
Composing and making offers I couldn’t refuse
Like large oak trees, prehistoric and stable for years
A New York Time’s Best Seller! Nature’s rules~
Adhering to a wonderful family tradition
Painting genuine and real fondness,
Bringing a covered dish to the table
Like good humor, in the face of inconsistency


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-14 11:39 AM


I held onto this noncommittal gesture for a few moments
Swapping inputs, feeling rather like
A key unlocking the front door of home
He played a couple of chords
While waiting for the connection
Rather divine and opulent
Like a breathtaking sunset over the Caribbean
Leaning forward with a silent simplistic view
One of which both complimented
And whispering in my ear, it tickled and tingled
And fulfilled robust promise and details of tomorrow
Taking me by surprise! And oh how I love surprises!

When I read your work, this cubicle disappears and I'm in your world... I like it there. *S*

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-01-14 11:45 AM


well, thank you suthern, what a nice thing to say...the doors open and your more then welcome anytime.  smiles and hugs
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