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Sea of Treasures
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Sea of Treasures |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Having a small place in the village, Just got way to expensive so… Encouraged by warm weather, Roses jetted their points of vibrancy Into new settings and began Introducing themselves, offering coffee and muffins Youthful couples pioneered oceans To a clear meaning of good thoughts Blowing away sticky humidity, through a whales snout Following their compass of movements Upon a sea of dreams Swimming in the sea found Lips rolling back with smooth white puberty Winking in an attempt to intercept Neptune’s loyal breath Soundproofing the gamble With a few maneuvers gesturing like a Good book in a bed and breakfast I held onto this noncommittal gesture for a few moments Swapping inputs, feeling rather like A key unlocking the front door of home He played a couple of chords While waiting for the connection Rather divine and opulent Like a breathtaking sunset over the Caribbean Leaning forward with a silent simplistic view One of which both complimented And whispering in my ear, it tickled and tingled And fulfilled robust promise and details of tomorrow Taking me by surprise! And oh how I love surprises! Firm answers slipped from the mouth of tropical rain forests Composing and making offers I couldn’t refuse Like large oak trees, prehistoric and stable for years A New York Time’s Best Seller! Nature’s rules~ Adhering to a wonderful family tradition Painting genuine and real fondness, Bringing a covered dish to the table Like good humor, in the face of inconsistency |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I held onto this noncommittal gesture for a few moments Swapping inputs, feeling rather like A key unlocking the front door of home He played a couple of chords While waiting for the connection Rather divine and opulent Like a breathtaking sunset over the Caribbean Leaning forward with a silent simplistic view One of which both complimented And whispering in my ear, it tickled and tingled And fulfilled robust promise and details of tomorrow Taking me by surprise! And oh how I love surprises! When I read your work, this cubicle disappears and I'm in your world... I like it there. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, thank you suthern, what a nice thing to say...the doors open and your more then welcome anytime. smiles and hugs |
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