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nothing Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 23Northumberland, UK |
A fish hooked on a line that was not cast A puppet on strings that nobody grasped Hypnotised Mesmerised Movements unsynchronised Follow the scent of a rich brown hair Savour the taste of a pale blue stare Vision trembling Memories tumbling Caught unawares in the gaze of a sun Shining for no-one A terrible thirst teased a drop at a time Begin assembling What lies within To be torn in a flurry of images Seeing only one like a snowflake That melts in your hand Leaving you alone Alone in the snow With only pictures of faces Happier places Long ago. Making sense is overrated |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I hate to say maltesas melt in your mouth but not your hand, but I will I liked and understood it - the poem that was Dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this. :-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a great piece...got me thinking and feeling love the ending! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
I read this at 3:37 a.m. my time,,w/o coffee,,,,,,,,understood, and liked,,,,,, take care Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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