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akforty7
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since 2004-01-10
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0 posted 2004-01-11 10:56 PM



The first look, the first sight,
I saw your face, so beautiful, so bright.

You gave me a reason
To believe that angels do come to earth.
Do I see your face in the clouds? In the skies?
I don't know which to believe, my heart or my eyes
I have fallen onto the wings of an angel

The sun is nothing compared to
The brightness you have added to my life
One touch from you could heal
My deepest pain

I'll never lose you; we'll never stay apart,
I'll search for you through unknown lands, which I will chart
I promise to keep you close,
For you'll always be in my heart.

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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
1 posted 2004-01-11 11:06 PM


Beautifully written.
I like it.

:-)

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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2 posted 2004-01-11 11:09 PM


Welcome to Passions...
Enjoyed your post.
ThisDiamond

Serra_Avatar
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since 2004-01-11
Posts 58

3 posted 2004-01-11 11:15 PM


I believe in angels. I like it.
Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-12 03:43 AM


"The sun is nothing compared to
The brightness you have added to my life
One touch from you could heal
My deepest pain"

Oh,,,,I know this feeling so well and first hand,,,,,,so wonderful how real, deep, soul love, can make a multitude of pain go away.

Much enjoyed the read.
Michelle

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