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Backward Energy
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Backward Energy |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Energy like flames within shoots upward to my brain away and backward from the love he tries to own. Repelled my spirit fights and retains unto itself the delicate and sensitive essence of my being. But I hide amongst the lies my treasured truth of soul and as the wind of my belief blows through reality, I am becalmed again … until next time my energy shoots upward to my brain! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Your words on the first verse were electric. You fired visions into my soul. How can I say enjoy your first words but then say I lost your soul in the second verse. Dave |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
But I hide amongst the lies my treasured truth of soul and as the wind of my belief blows through reality, I am becalmed again … We only have to answer to and for ourselves, and make no excuses for doing just that. Hugs Helen~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nicely penned! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
such emotion! |
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