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McLean
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state of marital bliss

0 posted 2004-01-10 06:43 PM




In some distant before now
I held your hand and pledged my vow.
You woke in me the best I am
And gave to me the greatest man.

I prayed for you to show me how
To be a person, sane & sound,
Someone another could love and see
How special, God, you have made me.

In perfect timing, my sweet Lord,
You answered me without one word
And as you promised, gave me life
And blessed our souls as husband & wife.


© Copyright 2004 McLean - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-01-10 07:11 PM


Very beautiful. An anniversary?
Your gratitude is touching.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-01-10 07:23 PM


Oh how lovely this is!
Extremely well written.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2004-01-10 08:17 PM


I'd never say that "god" gave me the perfection that is Mike,,,,but, I am thankful to be at his side,,,,I'm happy to see you too have found this
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-13 01:48 AM


McLean, what a lovely poem and, I think, the feeling of gratitude makes us better people!
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-01-13 03:27 AM


gorgeous!
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