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Open Poetry #30
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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-11 02:24 PM

A silver note
Creating your ability
To see
Dancing in your eyes
Rubbing that itch
You can not reach

Echoing a vision
Seeking it’s end
Dancing in the sunlight
Journey, destination, challenge
Sideways in
Before you know
Kissing every crystal
Moon
Of it’s delight
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steavenr
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1 posted 2004-01-15 10:34 PM

Ah, the spark of enlightenment that floods one's soul, exposing creativity...nice write.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-01-16 04:07 AM

wonderful...inspiring
J.Samm
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3 posted 2004-01-16 04:54 AM

if ever there was an unspeakable desire of something he wanted to fulfill, he has somehow spelled it out with this poem...
DavePage
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4 posted 2004-01-18 04:41 PM

Thanks

Silver Note was really about a Jazz guy and is almost like the intro to Baker Street on a Sax

Dave
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