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Open Poetry #30

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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-01-12 04:59 PM

We flew against the wind
We flew against the shore
Twisting in the wind
We flew for evermore
Thrills to ourselves
We twisted and we turned
The air for evermore

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-01-13 12:21 PM

I've flown through that wind before....nicely said...

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-13 04:09 AM

very passionate

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2004-01-13 01:28 PM

Hi Dave,
I really enjoyed a nice read here before
heading off to work.

:-)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-13 02:09 PM

Very nice...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-01-18 04:39 PM

Thanks to everyone for your comments

They are much appreciated

Dave

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