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Immersed in the lore of the sea
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Immersed in the lore of the sea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Wings pressed hard against my mind With a prose of lacy white flowers solemn with purpose A nosegay of unseen sunlight growing insistent Murmuring a mothers rhythmic series of soft words Drawer after drawer of impressions Resonating between my home Scattering widely creating impressions That every artist implores and knows Across the canvass of the hearts of mankind Pinching the fabric of reality Meeting my eyes directly, folding this place To a beautiful smooth enchant, isle of embrace Crystallized moments….persuading me closer, closer I dare, step out in the open In a drug like fearless notion There, whispers the face of love Tenderly blanket, tossing my flesh with encouragement Felt between my forefingers and thumb Like a wall to wall hallmark card, he writes his song Long near realm elaborately devoted With a sweeping gaze of embodiment, joy, freedom Like a night stand light illuminating the way Hands softly extended tossing away disarray What a pillow of dreams specially arranged Awning of countless freestanding climbing roses I am created with the flame of this open maneuver He waited, in a vacuum of deep space, always by my side Fully responsive and touching my face There is such a switch that turns on Serving full light to each and every room Serving a place long forgotten in my heart Opening great doors of tomorrow I am his and I surrender |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ It is not a surrender but a joining.  A lovely write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hello Sy and good day to you....thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem...and your absolutely right, it is a joining...which is what I surrender to...completely. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Lee This was a beautiful piece of writing. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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