Open Poetry #30 |
Lost Within My Daydreams |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I sit here in my solitude Just passing the time of day I am lost within my daydreams The real world seems far away A place where I escape to often For it brings much joy to me Deep within my mind I find peace and harmony A special time for reflection To think of those I love I often think of my dear father Whose light shines from high above I search deep inside my memory To the times that made me smile Then I remember the sad times When I walked life's lonely mile But I am rich in so many ways This I know to be true As I open up my heart And share my life with you * * * "Step into the presence of just one person who radiates love and you, too, are positively affected. Step into a moment of mindfulness of love - think about bringing love to the situation you are in - and you, too, are positively affected" I am in motion |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Suetang, This is a most heartfelt write, and you are so right about this: "Step into the presence of just one person who radiates love and you, too, are positively affected." ~K~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But I am rich in so many ways This I know to be true As I open up my heart And share my life with you Sue, thank you for sharing your heart with us. Hugs Ethel |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
Suetang,really a marvelous write.. always harash |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
very deep,,,,and I love that picture,,,,,hope you don't mind i copied it,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh yes! The power and beauty of what radiates from within so beautifully expressed..~C |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Sue, how true these words, how happy we all are in our own solitude, must seem so strange to other people that do not have the same interest or passion, it is our way of escape, which somehow generates our creative side. I enjoyed the read Sue, hope you had a happy New Year, all the best my friend, till next time. Sincerely Rick |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
A special time for reflection To think of those I love I often think of my dear father Whose light shines from high above this touches me deeply right now, thanks for writing it |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue... Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Your words really hit home with me right now and I really will take your words to heart and try to bring love into what I am going thru right now...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've shared these unique moments in solitude and introspection... well done, Sue. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, I love to daydream too ever so much, of my future dream girl and unicorns and rainbows and peace, as I find most joy there than when in a conscious state! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, time to go back to REMville, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so very true, Sue..and what a beautiful picture to go along with your lovely positive words. M |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Pleasant flowing words Every mind needs To acknowledge the peace they seek Dave |
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tavern wench Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 44 |
I often think of my dear father Whose light shines from high above My father, too, is shining down on me. A very thoughtful poem, worth a daydream. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Sue.. Your Dad is so proud of you! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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