Open Poetry #30 |
She's My Dream |
McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
You, my love, are my feathers & flames. Though your body is shot, your spirit remains. Thirty-five and technically called an antique, There's much more to you than just your physique. Nevermind that you're loaded & have lots of gas. You enjoy going topless - now that's what I call class! Aluminum heads, all shiny & new, You now have a 6-speed transmission, too. Fuel-injected for maximum drive, With a Pontiac engine 455. Many men have loved you in the past, But their love for you, it didn't last. Now I'm proud to have you as my own, To shelter you and give you a home... in my garage. My wife can't invision this beauty I see, As she stares at your frame with no doors & no seats. Assure her, I do, that you'll win at the show In your dress of new metal, painted Viper yellow. *wrote this for my husband to post in his "man-car-fixing-upper" forum, and wanted to share.I have lost my love to the garage these days, as he is hanging out with his '69 Firebird. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
So you're a car widow? I'm sure your husband got a smile from this. ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Yay! Every car needs a home and someone to take it for more than just a spin but also keep it snug in the garage, and sounds like you both are just the ones to make this Viper special, yay! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet McLean, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We have an immense potential of love ... also for cars. This is a very good write! Enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Cool part is,,,you'll look fab in shades,,,,,decorating the passenger seat,,,and he'll have done all the work!!!!!! Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...hope he remembers its you he sleeps with at night and not the car...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... What a delight this is! *S* Instead of complaining, you created... way to go! *S* |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was truly a "classic" piece of writing and so much enjoyed by this reader. I was smiling throughout and loved each and every word. P.S. I am sorry for your loss!lol Hopefully for your sake it might just be a phase your husband is going through?? Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Really cute write...very much enjoyed. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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