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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-11 01:52 PM

copper colored leaves
shriveling like fingertips
touch the frostbit sky
as the fallen ones beneath
echo of the tree that binds

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-11-2004 08:04 PM).]

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-01-11 03:09 PM

You have a touch with words

Dave

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

2 posted 2004-01-11 08:57 PM

Way to go!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-01-12 02:43 AM

beautiful imagery here

I am one of the ones beneath

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-01-12 06:45 AM

thanks a lot kids

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

5 posted 2004-01-13 12:55 PM

short and sweet

Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

6 posted 2004-01-13 01:21 AM

I am new to this forum and this is one of the first poems i have read thus far. Your imagery is impressive...and i love your use of personification with the word 'fingertips'. I think this poem is meaningful, and i look forward to reading more inkedgoddess!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2004-01-13 02:10 AM

Winter never read so beautiful
or evolved so poetically.

Hugs ya girlielocks~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2004-01-13 06:22 AM

glad you could come in for a visit

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-01-13 10:59 AM

InkyOne~
What a lovely Tanka~

Rich with imagery~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

10 posted 2004-01-13 01:38 PM

"Rich in imagery" is a perfect description of your writing, in general. This is beautiful, and I tell no lies.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2004-01-13 01:40 PM

nicely done.. painted well the images and left the idea of the metaphor being applied to our own life as well..

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

12 posted 2004-01-15 08:10 AM

This deserves to get bumped up again. Still like it

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