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Open Poetry #30

“While I sleep”

James McInerney
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 83

0 posted 2004-01-10 07:26 PM

“While I sleep”

Take me in your arms and hold me while I sleep,
Your fingers interlocked in mine like the perfect
dream,
The softness of your skin up close,
The words you speak, so sweet,
You probably didn’t realise this,
You made me feel complete.

Melodious_silence
Junior Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 37

1 posted 2004-01-10 07:40 PM

This makes me miss my boyfriend. We're always seperated. I think the best kind of poem is where other people can relate. I can relate to this. Because we are a part so much, when we're together it just makes everything that much sweeter. Thank you for posting

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

2 posted 2004-01-10 07:50 PM

Your short sweet poems are lovely.
Great job!

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

3 posted 2004-01-14 02:37 PM

Can't wait for snuggle time. This is so very tender.

McLean

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

4 posted 2004-01-14 02:40 PM

Hi James,
This is good too, I have been reading some fine poems tonight, great rhyme I liked it very much.
regards Richard.

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