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vandana
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0 posted 2004-01-12 10:25 AM



This will be our love
This will be our song
Just today
When everything turned out right
Stars above the sky
At the night
I see the moon so bright
Shinning so bright
Our love
This will be first
This will be the last
To love you
From the start
I knew
This would have been the love
The love we shared
The song of ours
Would shared by
two of us
Our love
Our song
Let the heartbeat fast
Beating fast
To the love
The love we have
This is our love
This is our song
Don't let the song stopped playing
It is our song
Andthe love is ours.....

© Copyright 2004 vandana - All Rights Reserved
McLean
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1 posted 2004-01-12 10:28 AM


on and on and on...

Lucky to have found someone to inspire this in you!

~McLean

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2 posted 2004-01-12 10:45 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I wish for true happiness to fill your heart and sing in you always, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-01-12 10:47 AM


vandana
Nice, enjoyed the read.

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-12 02:29 PM


Sweet........I find that almost all music,,inspires thoughts of my true love,,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-01-14 11:51 PM


Nice writing vandana...James
wordwizard
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6 posted 2004-01-15 12:07 PM


a song filled heart is great to have..shouldn't 'stopped' be 'stop' towards the bottom?


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7 posted 2004-01-15 04:07 PM


Some songs should be played forever. *S* Beautiful write!*S*
iliana
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8 posted 2004-01-16 01:39 AM


Ditto suthern's comment!
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9 posted 2004-01-16 03:30 AM


excellent!
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10 posted 2004-01-23 10:13 AM


A beautiful write my friend!
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