Open Poetry #30 |
Our Love, Our Song |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
This will be our love This will be our song Just today When everything turned out right Stars above the sky At the night I see the moon so bright Shinning so bright Our love This will be first This will be the last To love you From the start I knew This would have been the love The love we shared The song of ours Would shared by two of us Our love Our song Let the heartbeat fast Beating fast To the love The love we have This is our love This is our song Don't let the song stopped playing It is our song Andthe love is ours..... |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
on and on and on... Lucky to have found someone to inspire this in you! ~McLean |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I wish for true happiness to fill your heart and sing in you always, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Nice, enjoyed the read. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Sweet........I find that almost all music,,inspires thoughts of my true love,,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing vandana...James |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
a song filled heart is great to have..shouldn't 'stopped' be 'stop' towards the bottom? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Some songs should be played forever. *S* Beautiful write!*S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ditto suthern's comment! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A beautiful write my friend! |
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