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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-01-12 06:55 AM



Springtime's old nests

labor of love's creation

exposed as the leaves go,

does the freebird
still feel me at all?


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Kahlil
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1 posted 2004-01-12 09:29 AM


...maybe that's why they come back...  ~K~
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-01-12 10:10 AM


inkedgoddess
I would think so. Enjoyed  

Copperbell
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3 posted 2004-01-12 10:11 AM


I like how you said this.
vandana
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4 posted 2004-01-12 10:11 AM


enjoyed
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2004-01-12 10:11 AM


Questioned perfectly.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-01-12 12:01 PM


don't ever doubt it


choshi
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7 posted 2004-01-12 12:40 PM


Nice one...

Outside my window,
chickadees flitter about-
are they really free?


~C

bklynboy
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8 posted 2004-01-13 06:43 AM


of course they do....enjoyed
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