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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
The perseverance of thy noose upon the chains of winter, Sunder to the partisan of the leading hoofs of thy falls carriage. Bring up thy ax to shower the trinkets of frost from thy mornings pass, Stay wayward before the evening dawn and the darkened laced overcast. Do not speak of redemption before thy foes gale, For spring is upon the summit and the crystallites of ice dispelled. Before all thy rakish gold that standeth in vanquish before thy servants eye, Stay wayward to the storm venturing in sought of its treasures beyond its defiant skies. It is but a lone task of surrendering to loves laced rime, For a sharing will again be foretold by the violin glass that sustains within it the seeping sands of time. [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-04-2004 03:04 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ravenwolf....You have a tremendous poetic talent. I really enjoy reading your poetry....thank you for sharing it here. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jeff, I love your poetry. I agree with Martie that you have a very great talent and I am also glad that you are posting your poems here. Thank you.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful images and the poetry is superb. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautifully done..your use of imagery is exceptional (and the title is wonderful).  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Your imagery is fantastic! Love this piece. Welcome and I look forward to reading more of your work. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
What a lovely poem you have shared with us here at PIP. Keep them coming. Looking forword to the next. Love Bon-Bon  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully composed. Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ravenwolfvoyager - enjoyed reading this writing. Looking forward to more... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
It is but a lone task of surrendering to loves laced rime, For a sharing will again be foretold by the violin glass that sustains within it the seeping sands of time. The closing lines are eternal RWV... excellent job. TD |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
RWV... Amazing as usual...I just love reading you! Thanks! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful piece of writing! Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
.......and he played real good for free! What a gift you share! Thanks! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The more I read your work, the more impressed I am... I now watch for you, knowing I'll find depth and excellence. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeff~ This is marvelous~ 'For a sharing will again be foretold by the violin glass that sustains within it the seeping sands of time' AND ... the grace of the title is as lovely as can be~ <((>< *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Missed you on the front page... The multiple read brings to light another new perspective. Enjoying your work RWV. TD |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I can only echo whats been said, and add you fit in so nicely here..... truly refreshing to read you! ~~**~~ This morning theres a calm I cant explain By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone, I will bend light pretending it lingers on |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All of the above, and a belated thank you for a poem well done. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Thou sharest my minor passion: the familiar pronoun, and the usages that go with it. It pleaseth me well to see this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Enjoyed the read, well done and a belated welcome to this site. |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
WOW!! can you say tallented!heh...Very well done, my goodness I don't quite know were to begin, I enjoyed the poem just from the stand point of the way it was written, you don't read much like that anymore and I really enjoyed reading that style. Secondly the poem itself was amazing, words, flow, just all around beautiful. The last line was my favorite though, I think just beautiful imagery. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Wonderful imagery of verse, much enjoyed, welcome to passions. Sincerely Rick |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Ravenwolf I can't begin to tell you how much your words move me. You paint such magical pictures with your words and I feel fortunate to see so much through your words. "A poet weaves his words through each verse to create a most beautiful tapestry for us all to admire" I have been away on holidays this past week and it is so nice to be back reading your words again. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sending you back front row... Waiting for the next picture to paper. TD |
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
Daddy, you always do such a wonderful job with your imagery, i always enjoy reading your pieces of art. Thank you so much for posting. I REALLY liked it! ^_^ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jeff I can see I am not the only one who is in awe of your talent. I think I speak for many when I say that we are so fortunate you have made your way here to PIP. Our 'family' has become all the more richer since you arrived. It is so nice to see how proud your daughter is of her father. Take care my friend Sue I am in motion |
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