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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-01-10 02:43 PM

Where waves crash
along the cold night's dark shore
moonlight shimmers-
guiding my lover's way
on the long path toward home.

~Choshi

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2004-01-10 02:44 PM

beautiful

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-10 02:51 PM

Nice

Makes you want for more

Dave

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-10 10:28 PM

Really lovely poem, and I liked the hope that shined into it!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-01-10 10:42 PM

Where waves crash
along the cold night's dark shore
moonlight shimmers-
guiding my lover's way
on the long path toward home.

starry-eyed moon
seduction of the sea
withering beneath such epiphany

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

5 posted 2004-01-10 10:48 PM

This makes me think of the sea turtles, although a bit off season for them. The moonlight guides the new hatchlings toward "home"...the ocean's edge. Beautiful thought, thank you for that.

McLean

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-01-10 11:13 PM

Nice...James

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-01-11 10:34 AM

These almost-Tanka of yours are absolutely beautiful. You have a touch! Choshi is now on "the list"....

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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-01-11 11:07 AM

These almost-Tanka of yours are absolutely beautiful. You have a touch! Choshi is now on "the list"....

Thank you ~RL....."Almost"? ... Please explain..."The List"? ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-01-11 11:08 AM

"Nice..." James

Thank you James

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-01-11 11:10 AM

"beautiful" Thank you, Passing Shadow, for your kindness ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-01-11 11:11 AM

"Nice

Makes you want for more"

Dave

Thank you Dave, More...oh yes, them you felt my longings ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2004-01-11 11:13 AM

"I liked the hope that shined into it!"

Thank you Iliana, Glad you caught that...~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

13 posted 2004-01-11 11:14 AM

Inkgoddess wrote:
"starry-eyed moon
seduction of the sea
withering beneath such epiphany"

~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~

still shining,
the glimmering moon;
daybreak. ~C

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