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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2004-01-07 11:10 PM

She is beautiful; no more need be said,
no flowery rhymes of roses red,
nor madrigals from gods on high
that sing of stars in midnight’s sky,
for she is beauty, no less no more,
a beauty she, my heart’s adore.
If only I were but a poet,
I would write so she would know it,
no need that I would ever borrow,
dreams of her from my tomorrow,
she’d ever in my presence be,
for she is beautiful, a beauty she.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-01-07 11:30 PM

NIce writing...James

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

2 posted 2004-01-07 11:53 PM

Tim

"If only I were but a poet,
I would write so she would know it,"

you are a truly wonderpoet
with this peom you sure show it!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2004-01-10 08:47 AM

This is lovely, Tim. Softly beautiful!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-01-10 08:54 AM

I curtsey
to the poet.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-01-10 09:02 AM

Tim
As simple as that. Well done.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2004-01-10 09:06 AM

Beautifully expressed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-01-10 10:30 AM

Perfect Tim. hugs, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

8 posted 2004-01-10 12:03 PM

This is great! What a wonderful thing to be she.

I would melt had my husband written this for me. Beautiful words. I think I'll print it and put it in HIS book so he may stumble upon it tonight and read it to me!

McLean

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-01-10 02:48 PM

this is all she needs

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

10 posted 2004-01-10 03:29 PM

Beautiful

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

11 posted 2004-01-10 11:37 PM

wow,,,,this poem made even me feel pretty,,,lovely write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2004-01-11 12:10 PM

And, a beaut is this! What a lucky girl she is!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

13 posted 2004-01-11 02:28 AM

Hope she is as beautiful as your words of poetry..

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

14 posted 2004-01-11 02:55 AM

if somebody gave me these words...
I'd be in their arms.
You are a poet.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

15 posted 2004-01-11 02:56 AM

Very nice, and sweet. ~K~

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