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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2004-01-09 12:38 PM

~* Whispering Sighs *~

It was like you arrived
Without making a sound.
A single tear escaped
Hitting the ground.
I heard tired footsteps
Whispering sighs.
Although far away
I could still see your eyes.
The pain, the drain
The worry living there,
and wanted to tell you
As a friend, I do care.

~*~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-01-09 12:50 PM

Sharon, the person is lucky to have such
a caring person as yourself for a friend.

Hugs

Ethel

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-09 03:10 AM

Mysteria, this is wonderful! I loved it.

Brad_Smith
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since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

3 posted 2004-01-09 03:28 AM

beautiful in words and picture of a heart sincere

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2004-01-09 03:56 AM

This is perfect. You are indeed someone who cares - it's in every word of this poem.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-01-09 04:58 AM

very compassionate write (and heart)

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2004-01-09 02:14 PM

Thank you and I hope their soul will be a bit warmer because of friends like us all here.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2004-01-09 06:55 PM

Sharon, this is a beautiful way to share your warmth and understanding with a friend. Just lovely.

Best wishes and big hugs,
/Kit

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2004-01-09 08:55 PM

This is beautiful, Sharon. Thank you. (((HUGS)))

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2004-01-09 09:02 PM

You are such a sweetheart Sharon. This is touching and lovely. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2004-01-10 06:52 PM

(big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this touched my heart so much as your loving heart shines and you are bound to bring much comfort to this special person as you do for everyone! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I'm so happy to be back from vacation and read your gorgeous poetry again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

11 posted 2004-01-10 07:01 PM

Beautiful emotion of your heart.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2004-01-10 07:04 PM

Sharon, you are such a dear and caring friend to all.
This is so lovely.
~Soft smiles & Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2004-01-10 08:25 PM

a sigh, just a mere hint, that can often go unnoticed, but when heard can be the start of something beautiful

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

14 posted 2004-01-11 11:02 AM

Sharon...So tenderly written. Words from a caring heart. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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