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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-10 11:57 AM


Like crystal spinning weaves
Skating on thin ice
Loving reality but never being nice
Now the hydra mixes with the gen
The liquid of your thoughts
Is fire yet again
Now your body moves
With ever restless shape
You skin is gold
And so my fill I take


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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2004-01-10 12:46 PM


DavePage - you're thoughts in pen do her justice...

BC

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-01-10 01:27 PM


Thanks Bill but it does need a re-write.

Dave

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3 posted 2004-01-10 02:38 PM


okay, I read both and liked both...got two different meanings
DavePage
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4 posted 2004-01-10 04:11 PM


Long naratives capturing meaning
or words reducing long meaning
meaning a gentle drift towards a refusal to reality when the curtains are opened.

How many relationships work on long words
unless you are a politician

Private words without someone classical can often lead to meaning when someone realises Greece is not the movie but an idea to thought.

Dave

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