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Like crystal spinning weaves
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Like crystal spinning weaves Skating on thin ice Loving reality but never being nice Now the hydra mixes with the gen The liquid of your thoughts Is fire yet again Now your body moves With ever restless shape You skin is gold And so my fill I take |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
DavePage - you're thoughts in pen do her justice... BC |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Bill but it does need a re-write. Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
okay, I read both and liked both...got two different meanings |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Long naratives capturing meaning or words reducing long meaning meaning a gentle drift towards a refusal to reality when the curtains are opened. How many relationships work on long words unless you are a politician Private words without someone classical can often lead to meaning when someone realises Greece is not the movie but an idea to thought. Dave |
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