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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-09 07:04 PM


We met by an old wall
On a summer night
Early Songs dreaming our desires
We didn't know what to
One growing up
One too young to know how to
In our silliness
We said thoughts
We didn't know words for
My mind lost in words
My change spent on dreams
Every Morning


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1 posted 2004-01-09 08:37 PM


This took me back to a very special
first moment
of youth.

Thank you.

wintertao
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2 posted 2004-01-09 08:47 PM


I always enjoy your work Dave
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3 posted 2004-01-09 09:41 PM


yes, we all have a secret giggle from childhood this one highlights,,,enjoyed
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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4 posted 2004-01-09 09:44 PM


Dave, I really liked this.
Especially this part......

In our silliness
We said thoughts
We didn't know words for

Thanks for sharing.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2004-01-10 04:59 AM


always read you...always enjoy it
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6 posted 2004-01-10 09:52 AM


Great write!

Eric

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7 posted 2004-01-18 04:44 PM


Thanks

Dave

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