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Why does it take so long to say goodbye
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Why does it take so long to say goodbye |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Why does it take so long to say goodbye Why hadn't I the time for decency Why must it take years and someone a fool To stop me feeling cool Why must it take so long to say goodbye Why does it take so long to remember Why so long to appreciate Why so long to understand You weren't a God Just a man And finally I understand |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
OUtstanding! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dave, Hopefully we all live long enough to undersand. LOL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
had to come back to read and comment again, hope you don't mind. Why...well, I believe each of us has a very purposeful destiny, pre-arranged adn it's not over until we have completed our purposes...that is why every word we speak, every life we touch is so very significant...that is why we should do so in a positive way...only my assumption, but it makes things clearer doesn't it? Smiles and hugs... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You weren't a God Just a man And finally I understand oh yeah.....you nailed this thought! I understand this oh so well... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"You weren't a God Just a man And finally I understand" I had to ponder this...too close I guess... nicely done! |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Oh my Goodness... I love this. You weren't a God, just a man...my goodness, aren't we all just men...or women;-)! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks for the words. It took me from 1972 to write it. Dave |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Dave, wonderful sincere write... this came from so deep within and it shows! Take care. Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
All one needs is time and ........ prozac.  Enjoyed this much.McLean |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks for comments Almster, Vandana and McLean Much appreciated Dave |
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