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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-01-09 06:08 PM




passion's river gone

we'd loved as if explorers

seeking headwaters

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-01-09 08:32 PM


and yet, every now and then there is this rare alignment of stars...

but laughing, the spirit willing, my flesh is still...

grin.

Oh just bury me when I'm done typing, will ya?

Now where's my shawl? I KNOW I had one left over from my macrame' daze...

giggle.


wintertao
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2 posted 2004-01-09 08:50 PM


I liked this alot...well done indead.
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-10 05:01 AM


damn, you're good at these!
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