Open Poetry #30 |
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The Piper's Bill Is Coming Due |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
they will not tell you you are dying of excess gathered in your youth ©2004 by icebox |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, they won't. They simply tell you to act your age. Dang. [Now and then I insist on turning the numbers around! LOL... ![]() |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A youthful stranger seeking wisdom Stealing your future pleasures Fondly remembered And discarded Until needed Dave |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...funny, "they" seem to have no problem with telling me that. I used to consider myself a fairly good chemist too, but alas, methinks I've finally blown up the lab. What the hell, I wasn't much of a dancer anyway, but who cared in the 70's/80's, cocaine had us ALL convinced we were...something. and nod, we WERE. Indeed we were. shaking my head but grinning here, icebox, you always seem to write my thoughts, Pip is a lovely place with you in it, m'friend. ![]() ![]() |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Who determines excess? I want to be in charge of that gage.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
So very right! Many think that the piper will never ask for pay,,or that the Devil will ask to borrow a sweater before it happens,,,think about it,,, Good write Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I like this alot...as I do most all your work I read. I consider you among the most creative poets I have read on this site or any other. I love your short works. imo, this begs for a 2nd S...continue this for a few more lines...pls. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some of us don't need to be told ![]() |
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