Open Poetry #30 |
I Have Set This Burden Down |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
glory days of love fading in your memories perish in one soul ©2004 by icebox |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I found this much weaker than your other work...just imo. Line 1/2/3 nothing there creative like most of your short works. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
A familiar, haunting sadness touches me when I read this. ~K~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Tell me how you set it down.....time? ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe I could learn from you |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh yes!!! |
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