I Have Set This Burden Down

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #30

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2004-01-09 11:33 PM

glory days of love

fading in your memories

perish in one soul

©2004 by icebox

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2004-01-09 11:55 PM

I found this much weaker than your other work...just imo. Line 1/2/3 nothing there creative like most of your short works.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-01-10 01:12 AM

A familiar, haunting sadness touches me when I read this. ~K~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2004-01-10 01:13 AM

Tell me how you set it down.....time? ~K~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-01-10 03:25 AM

maybe I could learn from you

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

5 posted 2004-01-10 06:08 AM

Oh yes!!!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.