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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2004-01-09 10:48 AM

Captured

It had been too long
between mental convergings,
                                          was it just a moment ago I heard
                                          your sounds?
and aching is this soul
by some loss
of a love never mine.

For a moment, I feared
you might have forgotten
this friend standing
                                          leaning
next to you, here, in your mind,

and I considered, were you pondering
all that could have been?

Mayhap all that shall be?

“Ifs” split atoms so well.

For we have touched
one another
in ways
unknown to lovers

as we wonder why we cannot
give and hold to our own
in this deeper fashion,
even as
genteel lines of convention
circumvent our physical,
leaving us only
lines in the mystical.

Let me line with love your thoughts
once more,
and then again,
to steel resolve that love
evolves, and
clarify the why you’ve found
your soul
in me.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-01-09 10:51 AM

well, well.. guess I'm going to have to stop writing love poems.. cause AI sure can't hold a candle to this..

well done my friend..

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 2004-01-09 11:20 AM

"It had been too long"

too right! reading reminds me why i missed.

C

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-01-09 11:24 AM

Soleil Noir
Enjoyed the read.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-01-09 11:53 AM

exactly.....very well done...*soft smiles*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-01-09 11:59 AM

So very beautiful...
You have been missed.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2004-01-09 01:34 PM

Let me line with love your thoughts
once more,
and then again,
to steel resolve that love
evolves, and
clarify the why you’ve found
your soul
in me.

Simply beautiful!! Missed your words. Knew you were floating about. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-01-09 02:35 PM

lovely~

M

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2004-01-09 02:36 PM

“Ifs” split atoms so well.

For we have touched
one another
in ways
unknown to lovers

Right on the mark with your words, nicely done.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-01-09 02:42 PM

Soleil...lovely and spirit filled!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2004-01-09 04:22 PM

Oh,K~
Lovely, lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2004-01-09 04:30 PM

A Moving, touching piece...

library...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2004-01-09 05:06 PM

Soliel...very much enjoyed this entree'.
You always give us such a dish to dine of.
Welcome back...

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