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Gentle Sea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Persuasive understanding, prearranged by time Gathering matter, woven human life So full of Vienna and twilight Like a seafaring modest opinion Where my feelings step up eternal and free Climbing out of a pure autism of the crib Vigor…clarity, mixtures tasting so sweet Quoted electric lights, throwing legends adhesively It was pleasant in the streets, looking through the windows Witnessing early months hardy and rich with fruit Fattening for the market aloof and in tune Lifting depth from the scene, I believe Oh the flooded gates of sensations! Like white snow moving upward, interlacing mornings Coziness would even find flaws for self indulgence Change admires the novelist Reassured by a moment of silence Becoming an island bathed in light Improving passages, reworking essential serenity Fertilized by mysterious appearances Infinitely warming spirit Essential becomes the mother of miracles Let sense contrive its own account of life Art becomes pregnant with equilibrium Like sun parting the clouds Divine warrant with wide lawns Giving universal validity, motivation jumps through hoops Everything about life is a paradox nodding With a marvel revealed as far as the eyes can see |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well written |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Lee....just awesome imagery! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
your words and meanings slied together so beautifully. Sadelite |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
'tis such a joy to read your words. Your writing is truly inspiring. McLean |
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