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Open Poetry #30

desire

evolution2
New Member

since 2003-12-29

Posts 6

0 posted 2004-01-08 11:51 PM

in that instant i found love
the wayward meeting of our hands
the coldness of your skin melting into the warmth of mine
all my desires culminating in the scent of your hair
i saw my reason in your eyes
oh how i never wanted anymore than this
anymore than you
your skin tasted like love
as it gently brushed across my skin
i found tranquility in your kiss
as i fell into you, i fell into greatness
for that moment i was more than i could ever be
in that instant i found love
in that instant i found you

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-09 03:40 AM

This was beautifully expressed! Thanks.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-09 08:09 AM

very good write
Michelle

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-01-09 08:22 AM

I saw my reason in your eyes..stunning visual...I liked!

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