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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2004-01-08 01:48 AM


A dance, a dance,
like any dance,
who leads,
whos left?,
a chance,
for chance?
a
subtle dip,
a glance away,
will lead to things,
that dance away

© Copyright 2004 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-01-08 01:50 AM


True, true -- cute clip!
Enotneicna
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2 posted 2004-01-08 02:06 AM


enjoyed!!!!!!!!!!!

many blessings
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2004-01-08 05:50 PM


very catchy,,,good write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-01-08 07:31 PM


Jason, I really like this.
It's cute.
Hugs  
Ethel

GG
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2004-01-08 08:00 PM


very good
cute and catchy.. and I'll be repeating it all day now! ...all stinkin day.
But I like it!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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just out of reach
6 posted 2004-01-08 10:06 PM


and dance you should on your birthday! Well done. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-01-08 10:28 PM


HEY JASON!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY....May I have the next dance?
Birthday hugs and best wishes!

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-01-09 05:16 AM


Happy Birthday!
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