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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

0 posted 2004-01-08 06:52 PM

A squeezed lemon soul in hand,
Bulked within a desk-shaping,
Low slumped no sparkled eye.

As peers strode momentum lost;
no learning glories, blossom tossed.
Where to land?

Opened palm held lemonade,
pulp and seed amissed
a fragile child petal
caught lightly, pressed to teachers lips

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (01-10-2004 08:56 AM).]

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-01-08 06:54 PM

Please pardon the color of font. Time is little here and I got in a hurry!
Sadie

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-08 06:57 PM

Sure would like to know the story behind this one! Nice writing!........lol

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-01-08 07:01 PM

Yes, Sadelite, it is very good writing.
I enjoyed reading.

Hugs

Ethel

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2004-01-08 09:29 PM

wonderful poetry - just enjoyed it thoroughly - paul

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-01-08 09:43 PM

iliana,
   Thanks for your positive feedback!  (Yes, there is a story behind it, a sad one, but now he's kissed.   Everyone is teachable;  ya just have to get down to the right level of play!)
                           Sadelite

Ethel,
    You are so sweet!  Thank you for following some of my poetry.  I so enjoy hearing from you.
                          Sadelite

Paul,
    It was so nice for you to visit again.
Thank you for your kind comment.
                          Sadelite

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

6 posted 2004-01-08 09:45 PM

I too, really enjoyed this. It was like watching a wonderful transition

Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-01-08 09:59 PM

Caroline,
Thank you for the compliment. Seeing the real transition is even better! Thanks again for your comment!
Sadelite

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-01-09 05:22 AM

splendid!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-01-09 05:58 AM

good morning, passing shadows!
Thanks for the cheery comment! Catch you later!
Sadelilte

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2004-01-15 01:58 AM

this is great poetry. Love the last stanza. so compelling. wonderful imagery. kudos!!!

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-01-15 03:27 AM

Please pardon the color of font. Time is little here and I got in a hurry!
Sadie
Sadie,

Most importantly, are the colors of your heart and they come through here radiant and clear...~C

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