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Washing Machine - plus special bonus poem
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Washing Machine - plus special bonus poem |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
Clinging and Clanging and Binging and Banging my new washing machine Oh' she's such a dream 200 duckets and no more big buckets, I'm washing in style, cleaning with a smile. I walk thru the town, the ladies all around give me the eye; I'm house broke now that's why. Special little papers to give off the vapors of lemon or lime, I smell good all the time. There's so much to learn, the dials how they turn, all around; what a lovely sound. Clinging and Clanging and Binging and Banging my new washing machine Oh' she's such a dream -- Even Emily had bad days Days when words would glow Like volcanos full of love Destroyed by the flow Even Emily had bad days I see it in her lovely eyes You could be a feint in love For the detached in the skies Outflanked by the dreams Parachuting right on by |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The title made me laugh.. Sorta like those midnight commercials where there is always a "bonus" if you buy... "And if you buy this potato peeler within the next 6 years we will throw in, with no additional charge to you, this 28 piece genuine silver serving set" Loved the humor.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting play of sounds |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Interesting poem (s) |
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