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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-07 03:46 AM

puzzle me

i want you,
as you,
    nothing more,
    nothing less.
i want you
in good days,
    mad days,
    sad days.
i want you
in dark days,
    darker nights.
i want you
when nothing seems right
    for you.
i want you
when you think it's all ending.
i want you
when you open your eyes
and cry in my arms.
i want you
when you love me
    (edit by moderator) me
        curl yourself up
    against me.
i want you
when there's pizza sauce
on the corner of your mouth.
i want you
when someone pisses you off
    while driving.
i want you
when you stare at nothing
but something in your mind.
i want you
when the night is quiet
and the day too loud.

i want you.
i've always wanted you.
i've always known that
there was a puzzle piece of me
    that i didnt have.

and when i found you,
    i saw it,
and you fit me,
and i fit you,
and though we are different,
we are
o
n
e.
©snow'04

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-07-2004 07:44 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-01-07 04:32 AM

yeah...I've felt like this before...and maybe still do but won't admit it

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-07 11:14 AM

"and when i found you,
    i saw it,
and you fit me,
and i fit you,
and though we are different,
we are "
o
n
e.
exactly,,,,,cept,,,,I'm usually the one that loses it while driving,,,,
much enjoyed
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-07 02:00 PM

I like the almost hynoptic beat rising to the call.

Simple, meaningful, direct, echoing to an inward song.

Dave

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

4 posted 2004-01-07 02:06 PM

I do so like puzzles. Nice when you find that missing piece. Kudos.

McLean

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2004-01-09 01:40 AM

wasn't sure this piece would actually get any comments, but here you are..and i'm thrilled.

thank you all very much!

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

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