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Midnight Storm |
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MexicoCityBlues Junior Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 48The Point of Know Return |
naked moon dances high in the sky pouring sweltering light through shattered clouds dowsing trees with broadening pale glaze midnight storm creeps……creeps…… stealthily across churning gray of GOD’s lust above croons of frightened wolves echo blessedly across the meadow but drowned by slow rumble of whispering wind savage horror lands of prose? not since death of the sun Lightning sneaks up on his forest (classic thunder, remastered sound) trees leap, loose their roots lying helpless, left for dead on their sides silhouetted chalk lines on Chicago sidewalk peace be gone with the trees One star booms overhead shining with impossible genius (Kerouac?) of silicone cities and caramelized democracy (society is war of inner struggle) proud poised savior bragging rights. droning hisses of locusts batter his ears repression of concentration stumbled upon the Nirvana yet? not even close Sacred One scribbles perceptions of life on less-than-worthy paper with a less-than-worthy ball-point pen he looks to the Night to guide him through psychedelic dreams A ghost watches from the window Fireflies buzz beneath the foot of his throne Yet their fire has no burn Spirit of Words, Wander of Earth, Open Road, Purple Skies, GOD, take me through the mind of the pen where the Garden of Eden roams where the fate of society lies take me on the trip of trips take me through Morrison’s mind I will sleep above it all tonight spontaneity: is she….. Dream Machine? poems fly by GOD drinks his tea. "The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow! What amazing concepts you have painted here. I particulary like the juxtaposition of God calmly drinking his tea while the storm rages, it reminds me of Jesus asleep in the storm tossed boat. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I likes it mucho mas  |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
Nice -katie- |
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lovejunkie Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 93Indiana |
take me through the mind of the pen where the Garden of Eden roams where the fate of society lies take me on the trip of trips take me through Morrison’s mind ^---really really like that part. you have the greatest heros. you're gonna be someone's...someday! Hang in there...(i mean it.) "All you need is love..." -The Beatles |
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