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I Give to You
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I Give to You |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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For setting me free I give to you... Anything you want me to. For loving me the way you do I give you... Every last bit of love returned. For making me constantly smile I give to you... Every last piece of my heart. For choosing to stay with me I give you... All the tenderness and affection you want. For taking my breath away I give to you... I give you my soul... I give you my heart... I give you my love... I give you... Me...and all that I am. I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed- |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well....if that isn't enough to make her smile and blush, I don't know what is! Really nice Snowflake. Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What more could a woman ask for! She must be very special to engender such passion and devotion ~ and the gift of all of you! This was loverly!  To love eternal!  EA Great-looking photo of you! Strong and intense!  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Here's one I wish I'd written. 'Nuff said! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhhh...what woman wouldn't melt with this one! Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I give you my heart... I give you my love... I give you... Me...and all that I am. When both do this, that's all either of them should ever want. My Love and I do this every day, and I hope and pray that we will forever and for always. Hugs Ethel |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
oh man. if guys like you lived near me they'd all be taken. so romantic and sweet. The girl you wrote this about must be blushing like a summer rose. And why shouldn't she? It was a great write. Meg tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
actually she didnt blush she cried but shes worth all that so its ok :-) I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed- |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She's worth all that!! Oh goodie, glad to hear it! I think I would cry too, it is beautiful! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is about as good as it gets. Wonderful words and I hope your gal loves it. Hugs, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Excelent!! I loved this!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wonderful |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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