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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
This is a blood droplet Given to Forever kept least forgot Memory Within a thing that’s bought Gloom |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, And I made a ring from it. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very nice. Lots of blood droplets. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Few words, many connotations! Have a good day, Professor. This has been very thought provoking! Excellent thinking and presentation! Sadelite |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
ah!great.. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'forever kept least forgot'--- nice line. I like this poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
My mind played with this and read it 1,3,5 then 2,4. Enjoyed it very much, Sir. Thank you. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I was carefully taking a last scroll through dark tonight and tripped over this one again sooooo I got mad and kicked it up! I know I should apologize for this, but it's your fault-- You shouldn't have left it laying around! Sadie |
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