Open Poetry #30 |
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Jazna Leaning There (repost) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada ![]() |
This is a poem about a beautiful girl that died of cancer........Used to go boating with her. First love the strong one! The rain on the cabin windows drifts like rinse waves in a car wash. My fingers searching minor sevenths, my ardent gaze the portside rail, to see Jazna leaning there. The summer's marbled skies spread wide our trolling laughter buffed with spray, her listing form against the rail. I tune to open G where all blues and heartaches follow when. From sacred space her spirit falls, a surreal vision cosmos sent. Devolved from humid heavy mist her blue-eyed radiance beams in quandom pose leaning there. With sudden suck of breath to heart, my ebbing guitar descants play to searing pains of her demise. I cry out with odes and tears to see Jazna leaning there Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh Eric, this is powerful in it's rendition. It must have been an awesome memory. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such a soulful write.....heart hugs in understanding the pain.... ![]() Lauren~ ~~**~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome A touching piece and a haunting read. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..touching and well done... that it si for someone such as you describe..makes it indeed heartfelt. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ You already know that I love your Jazna pieces .... this is as stunning as ever~ Thank you for sharing her memory again~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's not always easy sharing things so very personal. Thank you, Ethome. |
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