Open Poetry #30 |
Third Installment - Weobaei |
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Weobaei, the word that takes a journey. This is the third Weobaei piece -- the word that morphs. . . . . This one introduces more players, Omahpaista and Manaeshte -- they will accompany some of the future Weobaei writings. Weobaei wore a garment spun of One night, the magic was stripped Master, Manaeshte, takes note of Manaeshte comes at night |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Interesting, Not familiar with this mythos But enjoyed the read. that’s the greatest joy of poetry the expression also teaches Gloom |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
WOW |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Prof. Gloom -- thanks....if you have a chance, read the first two about Weobaei -- I am taking this someplace, bit by bit. At least I hope I am. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M8 -- thanks for your comment. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, I see you've done it! I like your play on letters junctures and sounds, " obedient Weobaei " Also like the use of looming: "And as he turns in looming light, threads of toil around his soul" Sadie P.S.iliana, reread my Pavane's Blossom. I changed the ending. It's nice... No need to post back, but just check it out. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thanks, Sadie. Have a great day! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am enjoying this journey you are taking us on and look forward to installment 4, beautifully written. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Inventive, imaginative with a beautiful message |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
JamesMichael -- thanks for saying so. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hi, Mysteria -- glad your following the journey - it's been a really interesting one......stay tuned! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Choshi -- (like the name!) -- thank you for the wonderful feedback -- yes, this journey has been interesting for me and I'm glad you can come along! I liked the post that you left about the arthritis! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
This was such an interesting series, I just had to collect it all. Enjoyed! |
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