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Blue Sky Turned Into Grey
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Blue Sky Turned Into Grey |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Longing for love When you left me Here in the dark and cold Then since Blue sky turned into grey Wanting to hold Wanting to stay long But when blue sky turned into grey The time showed me pain Love brought me rain Love me away through the nights Let the darkness get away Let the skies turned into blue again My life is slow But Iam mixed up with all the changes Blue sky turned into grey Dark clouds came running Into time And turned into showers of forever Blue sky turned into grey... Never know The night showed the light It's way And blue sky turned into grey..... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
when blue sky turned into grey The time showed me pain Love brought me rain Love me away through the nights Softly melancholic. Beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely penned Vandana... Enjoyed the read much. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
My life is slow But Iam mixed up with all the changes Blue sky turned into grey Dark clouds came running Life does feel as if its slow when love is vacated. Funny that when love is in bliss there never seems to be enough time. You did a marvelous job capturing the moment in your write. Thank you for sharing. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"blue sky turned into grey" . . . I really like the way this threaded it's way thoughout the piece, forming it, tying it together.... enjoyed the read... jwesley |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I enjoyed this vandana, very nice! Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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